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Burned
Contributed by
notsoangelic3000
on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
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One step,
two steps closer,
closer to you.
Your hands,
at moments phase,
holding my waist.
Looking into my eyes,
you see a flicker,
flames start as you inch towards me,
closing eyelids to see magic,
as tounge-tied games are shown with every caress upon lips.
Here's a tip,
when you fall,
don't fall as hard as possible,
for you may love him,
but does he love you?
Only way to tell,
is if your life for awhile is hell,
until he says so too,
then you don't feel like such a fool.
Well, maybe you do,
but now there's not one,
but two of you.
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2003-02-09 23:20:00]
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Re: Burned
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by karoody on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 11:49:40 PM AEST
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| I like this. Can totally relate to what you are saying... |
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Re: Burned
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by TheSpiritx on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:30:19 AM AEST
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| Nifty. I like how you explained your point of view of the matter. Welcome to YPDC. |
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