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Gothic Dominations
Contributed by
doug
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Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:20:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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innocent flesh on corrupted finger tips
villainous handfuls of voluptuous bliss
lying desolate , your wretched creation
exploring carnal imaginations
on pounding streets drenched
in the shadow of illicit perversions
smiling men like phallic silhouettes
vying for Gothic Dominations
black leathered werewolves
lips soaked in forbidden lust
leering ,bestial , from their ravenous vortex
swallowed contentedly in sexual damnations
rampant breath convulsing with devious sensuality's
I'll give back as good as you ever gave me...
I promise : )
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doug
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2006-07-13 22:20:51]
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Re: Gothic Dominations
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by PoeticHybrid on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:26:47 PM AEST
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| I love the wording you used. Nicely put together. A very nice write. |
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Re: Gothic Dominations
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by JordonsBaby17 on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 11:04:41 PM AEST
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| nice. |
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Re: Gothic Dominations
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by Jane_Doe on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 11:56:38 PM AEST
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Oooh. Bluntly sexy and mysteriously gorgeous. Lovely words, you used, and some really passionately loaded feelings were evoked from the reader. I certainly enjoyed it-- A LOT
-Jane Doe (is tempted) |
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Re: Gothic Dominations
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by Davinah on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 03:07:27 AM AEST
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Superb!
~D~ |
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Re: Gothic Dominations
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by Keilantra on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 11:20:37 AM AEST
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rampant breath convulsing with devious sensuality's
I'll give back as good as you ever gave me...
I promise : )
This is a deep, dark poem, and very seuctive. Good write and keep it up. I loved it!
xXx
~kei |
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Re: Gothic Dominations
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 06:06:26 AM AEST
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Hmmm...
*smirks* Quite the lascivious write, you've got here, Sir. I must be frank, it got my wheels turning... Damn you, and your merciless talent, inspiring me, *grumbles*. =) Hehe. A delightful trip into the mind of a lecher! BRAVO! Sexy and covered in dirt... What malicious fun. Thanks for this. Needless to say... I enjoyed this. All my love.
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