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In memory of my friends (R.I.P.)
Contributed by
deadclown
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Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 07:43:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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It won't be long 'til the fire breaks out
and burns through the trust of your friends
and the light that you thought would continue to glow
flickers out cos you know it's the end
There's no faith in their words as they talk with deceit
causing pain 'til it cuts through your eyes
but you keep this inside 'til you know you can use
it against them and wait for their cries
No more will I try to be there for your needs
No more will I put myself out
No more will my friendship be torn 'til it bleeds
No more will I hear you all shout
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deadclown
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2006-07-13 19:43:54]
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Re: In memory of my friends (R.I.P.)
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by wizard on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:20:09 PM AEST
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sometimes there is a fine line between friends and enemies...i enjoyed this write, nicely done!
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Re: In memory of my friends (R.I.P.)
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by doug on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:32:34 PM AEST
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| I have known people who've done the same to me. I hope you have the chance to let them down and watch them drown. forgivings nice but getting even is sweet. good luck , doug |
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