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Mini Skirts ,The Typical Nature
Contributed by
football13
on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 06:12:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sitting on my porch
gazing through the mosquito misted air
Sticky sweet heat latched onto me
yet,smiling with out a care
Summer orange sun staying up for everyone late
As i watch the youngs playing baseball,
the brave ones step up to the plate
The ball goes flying up, up, and away
Into the neighbours yard
With
"THE BIG SCARY DOG!"
Officially ending their day
The adults of tommoro set out for the Saturday night
I am out too,relaxing only with
The dimming light
My tight stringed stresses slowly
lower
notes
The summer my song,
Tense the past, Lavender the present
and now pure bliss,
Gulping a sparkling coke, as it crackles off the ice
The liquid tickles my tounge, feeling extremely nice
Themomentwasshort,
My cell phone rang,I'm heading out for the night
Convinced by another, i guess i'll leave
My dimming light
Nature the pause button
To this youthful R rated movie
To fast and coltish
To realize a true beauty
Only the small mini-skirts with tanned long legs, are for the eyes on a Saturday night
No baseball games,
No sparkling coke,
No Orange sun,
When will the sharp eyes focus,
No need for glasses, yet so blind
The setting of a summer night, sometimes better then a really hot girl
who am i kidding, nothing is better then a really hot girl
I am the youth, yet pausing for a moment,
Latching onto the elder,then slipping off quickly
Back to my movie
In acting a part
Copyright ©
football13
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2006-07-13 18:12:46]
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Re: Mini Skirts ,The Typical Nature
(User Rating: 1 )
by doug on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:37:01 PM AEST
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| I liked this. It made me smile and I was quite interested throughout. Take care , doug |
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Re: Mini Skirts ,The Typical Nature
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by sohangme on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 04:59:42 PM AEST
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| Nice..I enjoyed it...I liked how it ended |
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Re: Mini Skirts ,The Typical Nature
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by dougnut on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 04:50:17 AM AEST
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Good read
I hope you continue writing like this,
looking forward to more.
God bless,
M . Doug :-) |
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Re: Mini Skirts ,The Typical Nature
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by Catalina on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 10:32:08 AM AEST
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| nicely done! beautiful write, I enjoyed it! |
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