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Femme Fatale
Contributed by
SweetHeartDealer
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Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 01:45:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Giant doe eyes gaze innocently
From beneath long lashes
Which reach almost to her perfectly arched eyebrows
Loose curls cascade down around her shoulders
Caramel waves framing her heart shaped face
Which bears creamy, unblemished skin
High cheekbones and pouted lips of the softest pink
To match her newly manicured nails
Upon delicate fingers - piano hands
Her gait is so smooth she seems to glide
Maneuvering though crowds with ease
Devine is an understatement
She’s every boy’s dream
What every girl longs to be
So flawless she must be fatal
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SweetHeartDealer
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Re: Femme Fatale
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by doug on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:26:51 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this very much. The last line is what caught me and it is a great line
So flawless she must be fatal
That will stick in my mind for a good long while. take care , doug |
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Re: Femme Fatale
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by Spike on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 07:19:54 AM AEST
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You didn't happen to get her number, did you?.....
Amazing what a few well-placed words can do to an errant and love-starved imagination. Nice one.
Spike |
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