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Alone I Stand
Contributed by
kabeer
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Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 01:19:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Alone I Stand, Alone I Fall,
Unhearing, Undebating a coercive call.
Silence in the night, silence in my mind,
Conceived thoughts, concealed behind,
Appears a Hand, slow yet busy,
Endearing me, eager to bind.
The hand gives me direction shows me light,
Enchanting, enlightening my muffled nights.
We share thoughts, dreams,our lives,
Unwebbing words under small hives.
Not across the deep seas we see,
Nothing beyond the skies we want,
Yet destiny seemed to be mocking me,
With a deliberate but blissful taunt.
And then one day, the Hand speaks,
It wants to grow, wants to fly, wants to leave,
Unconcerned about the love it made me beleive.
Enigmatic moments of mourning hearts,
Wanted, unwanted the story parts.
And now sometimes I wonder,
Why we wish, why we hope, why we care, why we think, why we wonder,
why don't we just stay away n surrender
Because like I said, I said
Alone I Stand, Alone I Fall,
Unhearing, Undebating a coercive call.
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kabeer
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Re: Alone I Stand
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by alasdaircairns on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 01:30:14 PM AEST
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| That is really cool and an excellent first post. Welcome to our world, by the way. Great poem. |
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Re: Alone I Stand
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by moses on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 04:49:38 PM AEST
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Wow that was amazing. Better than most experienced writers. Well done, really good job.
Alone I Stand, Alone I Fall,
Unhearing, Undebating a coercive call.
loved that, just try to stay away from trite styles like the four liners. [just my opinion]
A great read, and a great write...keep up the good work,
-moses |
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