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JAGGERED LITTLE HEART
Contributed by
blackholesun2006
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Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 09:38:27 AM in AEST
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I cant get no satisfaction
so this will be the last time, the last time
you're legs are pasty and dougle's gone home,
jumping jack flash in the sea,
bernard matthews turkeys,
got burgers on the grill
you cant always get what you want
but I will
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Re: JAGGERED LITTLE HEART
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by deadclown on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:01:31 AM AEST
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| Are you on some kind of medication? |
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Re: JAGGERED LITTLE HEART
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by blackholesun2006 on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:29:01 AM AEST
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no medication, two spoonfuls of ambition everyday sorts me right,
the poem is ironic to show the trouble and tribulation of coping with everyday thoughts
it has a sinister edge and a semantic mood of insanity cos the world is insane they just do not know it is yet |
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Re: JAGGERED LITTLE HEART
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by deadclown on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:56:15 AM AEST
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| Maybe you should've posted what you wrote in your comment instead of writing this poem if you expected anyone to understand what you were going on about |
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Re: JAGGERED LITTLE HEART
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by Keilantra on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 11:16:47 AM AEST
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the last ine was great, even though i'm not sure i quite understood the poem.
xXx
~kei |
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Re: JAGGERED LITTLE HEART
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by bigbadblinkybill on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 02:19:27 PM AEST
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| not sure what you are going for in this? too many ideas in one place .... keep on truckin you'll get there |
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Re: JAGGERED LITTLE HEART
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by sohangme on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 05:04:36 PM AEST
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| Isn't there a song sort of like this? Not sure I understand the poem. Keep trying if you are serious! Thanks for the read! |
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