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In the Mirror
Contributed by
Kman
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Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 06:55:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Can't stand whats right infront of me
can't handle whats going on.
My life is spinning round and round
All the ***** falls to the ground.
Make out like life is perfect
keep trucking on as normal,
what you see is what you get,
not in this case, You want a bet?
Know one sees the hidden pain,
the ripping hate inside,
Pain i do not choose to keep,
crawking through my vains its deep.
Copyright ©
Kman
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2006-07-13 06:55:30]
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Re: In the Mirror
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by PoeticHybrid on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 07:20:51 AM AEST
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| Nicely written. Welcome to YPDC. Please keep sharing with us. |
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Re: In the Mirror
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by alasdaircairns on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 08:05:33 AM AEST
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| Good work and welcome on board. Keep posting and commenting and I guarantee you'll meet some good people and read some fine work on this site. Oh Yeah , hope you're ok because you sound quite down in your poem. |
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