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The War..My War

Contributed by MrPerfect on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 12:41:13 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Pushed and pulled
Saturated and wrung out
Thrown off the path
Into the deep dark Forest
sitting alone with no fear
just a feeling of familiarity
My only other feeling is Survive
I see a path
It glows like a neon sign
But I don't Like that path
It looks a little..dirty
I'm pulled towards it like I should
whats that noice the sound of bells?
ohh look at that path
it's perfectly clean
I love that one
I'd be safe there
that ones far away though
ah well I love a challenge

Something isn't right
something doesn't feel right to me
I feel like theres something here
watching me
wh what are these creatures?
these repulsive looking creatures
I really need a weapon of some sort
That or someone wanting to fight
Because this is gonna be a War
Trust me

Copyright © MrPerfect ... [ 2006-07-13 00:41:13]
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Re: The War..My War (User Rating: 1 )
by randumbchit on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 08:08:11 PM AEST
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interesting imagry it reminded me of robert frosts the Road Not taken in some aspects keep writing .
Ame pronuced Amy

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