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The War..My War
Contributed by
MrPerfect
on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 12:41:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Pushed and pulled Saturated and wrung out Thrown off the path Into the deep dark Forest sitting alone with no fear just a feeling of familiarity My only other feeling is Survive I see a path It glows like a neon sign But I don't Like that path It looks a little..dirty I'm pulled towards it like I should whats that noice the sound of bells? ohh look at that path it's perfectly clean I love that one I'd be safe there that ones far away though ah well I love a challenge
Something isn't right something doesn't feel right to me I feel like theres something here watching me wh what are these creatures? these repulsive looking creatures I really need a weapon of some sort That or someone wanting to fight Because this is gonna be a War Trust me
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Re: The War..My War
(User Rating: 1 ) by randumbchit on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 08:08:11 PM AEST (User
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interesting imagry it reminded me of robert frosts the Road Not taken in some aspects keep writing .
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