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I Surrender

Contributed by unseensilence88 on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 10:05:52 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry



Darkness consumes my being
Gently covering my eyes
In my ear it whispers
Its sweetly hidden lies

It tightly holds my mind
In its outreached hand
Showing me false direction
To an unknown land

My heart screams in protest
Crying its silent tears
While it attempts to run
From my unspoken fears

Although my eyes are dry
My tears continue to fall
Magnifying the pain
But still to you I call

The shadows continue to tell me
This land is free of pain
Only pleasures of life
Are the elements that remain

In the silence of darkness
Your voice is all I hear
Whispering its melody
Through a falling tear

All these serenading lies
Mastered the art to deceive
But no matter how tempting
From your side I will not leave

You have led me
From reliving my past
By showing me your guidance
And a love that will last

So now in turn I'll say
I'll love you completely
Surrendering my heart
To give you all of me




Copyright © unseensilence88 ... [ 2006-07-12 22:05:52]
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Re: I Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 10:26:15 PM AEST
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Hey nice post. You stuck to your rhyme scheme pretty well and everything, I liked it. Happy posting and welcome to ypdc!


Re: I Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 10:31:32 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poetic effort, but I must say that the ending was a bit weak...it seemed hastily contrived, and did not do justice to the rest of the poem.


Re: I Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by Solidsnake116 on Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 06:54:14 AM AEST
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nice.


Re: I Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by Solidsnake116 on Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 06:54:15 AM AEST
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nice.




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