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To You...
Contributed by
midnight_writer
on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 08:50:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This is for you
You're very first poem
Don't you feel special?
I would give you these words I write
But I don't think you would understand
You don't seem the poetic type
Best friend for so long
But now we're so much more
Then just friends
Will you be
Just another on my list?
Or something better?
Sweetheart...i hope you can be
Does this make any sense?
Only to me...
I don't expect much
So please impress me
I feel the need to be shocked...
It will take a lot
For me to fall for you...
Up for the challenge?
You make me laugh...
The main thing I look for
So please don't ruin it
I don't mean to sound negative
I'll give you your chance
Just like all the rest
Everyone loves you...
But will I have to fight
For your attention?
I think this can work
But I don't want to be hopeful
I will not get hurt this time...
Here's a poem for you...
Even if you'll never read it
Don't say I never wrote about you...
Copyright ©
midnight_writer
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2006-07-12 20:50:44]
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Re: To You...
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by PoeticHybrid on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 08:57:17 PM AEST
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| I like it. I get a sense of drawing lines in the sand. Daring the other to cross it. If that makes any sense to you. Nice Write. |
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Re: To You...
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 09:31:24 PM AEST
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very diffrent then any other writes
refreshing i like it alot |
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Re: To You...
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by MarLites on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 10:45:20 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this it was cute.
Mary |
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Re: To You...
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by MrPerfect on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:17:43 PM AEST
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nice poem flows very well, sounds like you have some hard times before...ah well so have i hope you find you perfect person
Cody/MrPerfect |
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Re: To You...
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by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 05:29:42 PM AEST
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nice sense of irony and attitude! i like this, it's just, well, different! i could see facial expression whilst i was reading it, it was conveyed very well,
tuesdyx |
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