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Truth of them
Contributed by
mindset
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Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 05:07:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Words of past to only remain
Inside out pure explain
What was then
So much lost
Our world now
So complete
To forget an only retreat
Evolution a mind
Of our create
Too much lie and pure desite
Close our minds for what
Our street
What of inside and pure belief
Open arms dont fall beside
What you read its just the thief
To ignore a past
Of pure and breath
For them before
Few now understand
And wait on now
For us to change...
Copyright ©
mindset
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2006-07-12 17:07:56]
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Re: Truth of them
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by Sony_Boat on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 05:33:59 PM AEST
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All those who before us tried to make a difference
Many things we need to protect
I cannot even begin to speak, your poem is very deep, very logical.
Keep writing, share your knowledge, forget the zeros.
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Re: Truth of them
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by mindset on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 01:42:27 PM AEST
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