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Untitled
Contributed by
poetichybrid
on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 04:29:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Using simple means
Destroying corporate machines
Pointing out lie after lie
While the abandoned children cry
For a better place to sleep
Where the vermin don't creep
Into their beds
Or into their heads
When the sunshine breaks the clouds
Like the lifting of a thousand shrouds
The picture becomes clear
No more cries can you hear
For once we all agree
Prophits now only for see
Happiness and Laughter
So ends this dark chapter.
Copyright ©
poetichybrid
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2006-07-12 16:29:44]
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Re: Untitled
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by richcol7522 on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 06:07:01 PM AEST
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| Good write...I know what you mean the samething happens to me sometimes when I get writer's block. It had a nice ring to it. keep up the good work. |
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Re: Untitled
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by one-curly-fry on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 04:10:12 AM AEST
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Better than anything I do when I've got a block! I'm currently going through a bit of one - can't get more than a few lines out!
Good write!
- Tim |
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Re: Untitled
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by Zoey8771 on
Monday, 24th January 2011 @ 10:38:52 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Loved the topic of it too. |
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