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The Clearance
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 01:02:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Take my sad emotion,
My feelings , and my pride,
My anger , hate , and misery,
And the tears that I have cried,
Make a box of sturdy wood,
And then place these things within,
Tape it up very tight,
Then throw it in a bin,
Take my happiness and glee,
My warmth, my smiling face,
My hopes , my wishes, and my dreams ,
My goodness and my grace,
Place them in my little home,
For all the world to hold,
For this is where they belong,
Or so I have been told,
Throw out misery, retain the good,
But remember when things are bad,
You threw the sadness in the bin,
Thats why you should be glad.
Copyright ©
jerseysue
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Re: The Clearance
(User Rating: 1 ) by PoeticHybrid on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 04:48:20 PM AEST (User
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Nice write. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: The Clearance
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 06:12:16 PM AEST (User
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Oh gosh, sue .. if only, eh?
Words to live by, for sure! I wish we really could lock
up those sad and tortured emotions ..
but then .. if we never felt bad, how could we possibly
recognize good, right?
Intriguing and beguiling write!!
~Breezy |
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Re: The Clearance
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 06:23:20 PM AEST (User
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A hard thing to do but well worth the effort....a delightful poem
Shari |
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Re: The Clearance
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 06:47:40 PM AEST (User
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A very nice poem, Sue. I like the way you got rid of all the bad emotions and locked them away.
Thank you,
Tim
(who wishes he could really do that)
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Re: The Clearance
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 06:56:37 PM AEST (User
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Sue~
My dear friend I wished I could do that. It would make life so much easier. If we don't feel the pain we wont appreciate what is good in our lives. Do you know what I enjoy so much about ur writes. They are always from ur beautiful loving heart. You're a true inspiration and a spirit lifter. I wish onto you what you so willingly give to others my dear friend. Love, joy and happiness always.
God bless u dearest Sue~ You're a true gem.
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: The Clearance
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 04:25:09 AM AEST (User
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If only?
yes it would be nice to have all that locked away.good write |
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Re: The Clearance
(User Rating: 1 ) by lillyjane on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 04:30:17 AM AEST (User
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Such good advice Sue.. lovely poem. xxx |
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Re: The Clearance
(User Rating: 1 ) by dougnut on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 01:48:37 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful words Placed in the correct order to
make a truly inspirational poem penned with
love from your heart.
Awesome write, food for thought.
Thanks for sharing your gift
God Bless you.
Hugs from Doug. :-) |
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