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Hit The Hex
Contributed by
alasdaircairns
on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 11:33:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Hit the Hex on Monday,
Making monstrous shapes,
It was great,
Stomping with my mates,
There's no wait,
No need to denigrate,
Drinking up till late, that's our fate,
In a state, on a plate.
Songs I used to hate, so irate,
Have a way of making dates.
Loving life, it's better, then before,
No longer dreading what's in store.
I wrote in that letter, about the whore,
Now my heart is never aching anymore.
Found a brand new lover, opens doors,
Oh my heart, never seen the light of day before.
No longer undercover, feeling raw, heart's not poor,
Just dripping passion and profusion as a law.
Copyright ©
alasdaircairns
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2006-07-12 11:33:06]
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Re: Hit The Hex
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 12:21:50 PM AEST
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| Glad you are feeling better, you have to be strong, I am still trying to get there.. brilliant poem xxx |
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Re: Hit The Hex
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by alasdaircairns on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 12:34:05 PM AEST
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| Luckily for me, I stumbled upon a girl who is deeper, funnier, better looking and more enriched than than the girl I wasted 7 years with. If there's hope for lil ole me, there's hope for everyone!! Thanks for readiing it though-it's probably one of my worst poems ever but I was trying to waste time instead of hanging up my washing and making my friend a birthday card! x |
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Re: Hit The Hex
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 01:02:48 PM AEST
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Very unique and different.
refreshing really.
Jeff |
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Re: Hit The Hex
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by deadclown on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 09:02:47 AM AEST
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| Don't know u but it's always good to hear(or read)that someone is moving on with their life. You've only got the one so why not be happy when you can. Hope you put the washing out too |
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