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wishful summer
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 07:12:42 AM in AEST
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fly over the moons
hearing birds sweetly croon
lovingly I dream of you
i wonder when I'll meet you
it's like waiting
waiting for the sunrise
yet I know
i'll fall asleep waiting waiting for you
but
I'll still sit there and patiently wait
throught the nights, the years and days
oh what happy days
but they all just pass me by
I sit here waiting
the trees they walked away
they couldn't bear my presence
and I understand and only long for them
the birds they pass me by like I was air
I told stories that no one heard but still I shared
I woke and dream and slept alone
with rose
my beauty rose
alone with me
and still waiting
...
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2006-07-12 07:12:42]
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Re: wishful summer
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 09:17:46 AM AEST
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| A wistful piece. One can get lost in reading it, imagining the same wait as you. Very good write. Kimberly |
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Re: wishful summer
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by mysonnet on
Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 10:03:19 AM AEST
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| i'm waiting the day to meet you too. (: one of the best of your pieces! |
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Re: wishful summer
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Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 10:03:19 AM AEST
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| i'm waiting the day to meet you too. (: one of the best of your pieces! |
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