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My Love Await's
Contributed by
candysears
on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 08:43:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I know my love wait for
Me,
Over by the brook, where
The blue waters run
Free,
A pink rose he left for
Me..
As a token of his affection
So graciously…
He gave to me…
A pink rose over by the
Brook, where the blue
Water run free…
So now, I will give to
You..
My love sealed with a
Kiss...
Copyright ©
candysears
... [
2006-07-11 20:43:05]
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Re: My Love Await's
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 11:54:40 PM AEST
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What a lovely peice of poetry, i just got lost in
it and all the way through it i could see this little wodden foot bridge and grass all around it and a babbling little creek. what
beautiful litlle murels of love u paint.
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Re: My Love Await's
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 11:58:40 PM AEST
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Very sweet, tender, awesome write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Love Await's
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 09:35:34 AM AEST
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| Very good poem. It's short but it tells us a story within it. Very good write. Kimberly |
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Re: My Love Await's
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by poet_in_waiting on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 10:17:35 AM AEST
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Exactly the right ammount of words. perfectly placed
cheers
sean
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Re: My Love Await's
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 09:08:03 PM AEST
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Short, simple and sweet. I absolutely loved it ~*CS*~Well done my dear friend.
Blessings to u always,
sue m |
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