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Lonely
Contributed by
SunRaise
on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 04:40:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Lonely nights
Even when your here
Lonely days
Even when your there
Lonely tears
On my face
Lonely tears
Im such a disgrace
Lonely Life
Even though were husband and wife
Lonely years
So many leers
Lonely forever
That my soul did sever
Lonely forever
I endeavor,to make you happy
Lonely forever
Inside I only feel crappy
Lonely till I die
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2006-07-11 16:40:02]
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Re: Lonely
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by seci on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 04:54:20 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem but i can't understand why you feel this way. i wish you the best and keep writing your feelings i will promise even if i am the only one keep reading your poems. |
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Re: Lonely
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 07:25:16 PM AEST
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this is a very powerful write.. its very well expressed.. I love the flow of it.. I understand how you feel.. you can be with someone and still feel lonley.. hang in there.. I hope things get better for ya.. very well expressed and well laid out.. thanks for sharing
JENNITTUDE |
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Re: Lonely
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by Davinah on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 05:56:28 AM AEST
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Very well done...
~D~ |
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Re: Lonely
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 09:39:20 AM AEST
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| A discouraging sad poem. It seems that your in a far off place in this poem, looking at yourself in a lonely situation. Very compelling write. Great read. Kimberly |
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