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Tears....
Contributed by
solmyr1404
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Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 03:48:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As my last tear falls to the pillow,
And I fall again into the land of sleep,
Exhaustion from crying
After reading through your last letter,
Seeing where you wrote
"I love you.
I know I've said it before,
But now it means so much more,"
I mutter another "I love you"
I'm not sure with ever be heard....
And then there's the dream....
I can't say exactly what happened in it,
But I know you where there....
You were here on some trip,
And you saw me watching,
You recognized me....
You snuck off from the group to be with me....
I really don't remember much about that dream....
But when you kissed me,
It felt so real....
When you held me, and I, you,
I could feel your warmth of your skin....
I could feel your heart beating....
I awoke in tears....
But this time not just the tears of year-old grief,
But also sweet tears of love....
Of happiness....
Because even from the grave
I can still feel your love for me....
And I know
You can still feel
My love
For you....
this poem is true.....this happened just a few days ago....i have poured my heart into this one unlike any other, except for purple mountain haze, also about this same person....
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Re: Tears....
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by deadclown on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 04:08:43 PM AEST
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| Openin up like this warrants comment. You're feelins are so raw that I couldn't jus read this without givin your words acknowledgement. Very beautifully written. Sad piece, but beautiful. Hope others give comment. It's a big thing to share these things with other people. I appreciate it. Hope others do |
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 07:27:30 PM AEST
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wow this is very sad im sorry to hear about your friend.. this is a beautiful write and very well expressed.. your friend probably watches over you and will be forever in your heart.. very beautiful write
JENNITTUDE |
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Re: Tears....
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 06:35:35 AM AEST
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My condolences on your loss. I too, lost my best friend last week. I commend you on writing this. It takes alot of strength and courage to be able to write about a dear loved one you've just lost. My heart & prayers are with you friend and if there is anything I can do please pm me even if you just want to vent or you want somebody to talk to. Know that I am here. Once again I'm so sorry for your loss. May time be kind to u and heal ur wounded heart real soon. She'll always be with you wherever you go or whatever you do. She'll always be watching over you.
love, hugs and heartfelt prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Tears....
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 09:41:54 AM AEST
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| What a soulful write for a person you so obviously cared very deeply for. Im sure this woman is greatful to you to hold on to her memory. (I am also sorry for your loss). Take care, Kimberly |
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Re: Tears....
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by Aeris030388 on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 06:23:24 AM AEST
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| Beautiful |
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