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Standing on The Beach
Contributed by
sadaddy
on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 12:56:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We are standing on the beach
Watching the sunset slowly go down
With this slow blowing breeze
and waves rolling across our feet
With you standing so ever close
You in front and me just behind
With our hands so ever inter twined
With your hair blowing in my face
It smelling so ever saccharine
I loosen one hand reach up
And pull your hair aside
Then I lean my head so ever slightly
Towards your sweet smell neck
Then I begin to lightly kiss it
from top to bottom
I can notice the chill bumps
Across your exposed skin
You moan so ever slightly
As to give your approval
You softly curse my head
As to want me to continue
This so ever lightly kissing of the neck
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sadaddy
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2006-07-11 00:56:31]
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Re: Standing on The Beach
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 02:08:09 AM AEST
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Reminds me of Daytona Beach 1988.
Very good writing.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Standing on The Beach
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 02:31:08 AM AEST
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| I could almost Imagine being there..... |
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Re: Standing on The Beach
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 04:44:22 AM AEST
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| I could imagine being there to beautiful poem xx |
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Re: Standing on The Beach
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 12:32:13 PM AEST
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How lovely... took me away, just for a moment...
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Re: Standing on The Beach
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by Sasha on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 01:20:29 AM AEST
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| Nice write, beautiful moments, got lost in those lines like everyone else here!! |
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