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Journey through the Stars
Contributed by
keilantra
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Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 08:11:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Take a picture for me
And send it through the stars
Around the sun and thru the drops of Neptune
Send it somewhere far.
Give me a memory
To wrap around my heart
Let me take you to Venus
Show you where it all starts.
Take the rings of Jupiter
And tangle them in my hair
Put Mars’ fire in my eyes
Come and let us share
The warmth of Mercury’s radiance
And swim thru Earth’s waters
Sit atop Uranus’ moons
And defy all laws of matter
Indulge yourself in the beauty of it all
And then we will travel the universe again
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keilantra
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2006-07-10 20:11:33]
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Re: Journey through the Stars
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 08:32:19 PM AEST
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Kei~
A beautiful and most uplifting piece of poetry.
You warm up ones heart and take them on a breath taking journey through ur world~
Thank you for the smiles.
Take care,
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Journey through the Stars
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by Logan on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 10:12:34 PM AEST
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| This is a great piece of poetry. I cant explain it, but i felt this poem. I really enjoyed this poem. |
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Re: Journey through the Stars
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 02:34:59 AM AEST
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I applaud
I really like this flow |
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Re: Journey through the Stars
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 10:17:12 AM AEST
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Loving the explicit imagery your wording presents to the reader....Very nice!! Beautiful title to go along with your write...I enjoyed this!
Keep it up : )
Scorp. |
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