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When I Awake
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
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Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 03:56:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I look through the frosted window glass,
Hoping that some way, love might pass,
Crazy it seems, to want beauty to die,
But how can I go on, living this lie?
Day after day, smile painted on,
An empty shell from which all hope has gone,
Watching love walk away, out of that door,
To leave my heart breaking, right there on that floor,
And carrying on, with the daily grind,
Others unaware of what they would find
In this heart of mine,
Battered, broken and bruised by time,
There’s nothing it seems, except pictures of you,
Colours swirling, changing hue,
Reminding me of better days,
When things were clearer, in so many ways,
When the answers were there, in your crystal eyes
Before time pulled us apart, and we said our goodbyes,
Even then we knew we could never let go,
Why we did is a mystery, it left me so low,
Our meeting again brought my soul to life,
Your love for another stuck in sharp, like a knife,
How could you desert the wonder we shared,
Abandon me, pretend that you cared,
How easily the fragile heart breaks,
Like the dream shattered when the dreamer awakes,
Please, don’t let me open my eyes,
To find you gone, before the sun can rise,
Before the strars have even left this sky,
Not again, not tonight, no more tears to cry,
Awake with me and let us begin,
To live a life free from sin,
Find our joy in each moment we share,
When I awake, let me find you there.
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Ruby2sdy
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Re: When I Awake
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 07:18:35 PM AEST
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A very nice poem and one filled with sincereity not to mention it also says alot about the differenc between real love and implied love, real love survives all adversities, but of course the participants must also be relsilant 2 outside scrutiny by those who would wish harm 2 any relationship that they themselves are deprived the chance for. a strong and deeply convincint write. nice going.
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Re: When I Awake
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 08:22:45 PM AEST
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| Your story of heartbreak is very well depicted in this poem. I can totally relate to this as I have been in the same predicament. It was nice to read this and be reminded of what I have went through and overcame. Great piece. Take care, Kimberly |
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Re: When I Awake
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 05:36:25 AM AEST
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| Lovely poem but so sad, I can relate to it. xx |
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Re: When I Awake
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 01:20:52 PM AEST
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A well expressed sad poem.
well done!
Jeff |
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Re: When I Awake
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by Sparda on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 04:33:52 PM AEST
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That was amazing...
Something I can really relate to.
Good Job.
I also like your style of writing, and genre..
expect more comments, im gonna go read summore.
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