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He Listens
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 10:33:27 AM in AEST
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Fireworks flying through the air
Soaring, bursting high above
No they are in his eyes
For he has fallen in love
All the swashbuckler movies
He has watched throughout the years
Has not prepared him
For the uncertainty and the tears
Football and the other sports
Don’t help him figure out
Just what she is thinking
Frustrated he could just shout
Finally he just decides
He will go with the flow
And just talk to her
He will listen and will know
Hand in hand he walks with her
Along the oceans sandy shores
Sharing dreams and wishes
Now his life needs nothing more
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2006-07-10 10:33:27]
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Re: He Listens
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by Ruby2sdy on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 10:44:13 AM AEST
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And what a lvoely story this poem tells!!! Very nice, I enjoyed this poem immensely!!! Brilliant!!!
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Re: He Listens
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by alasdaircairns on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 12:18:23 PM AEST
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| Ahhh it's really sweet. i hope she makes you this happy for a long, long time. |
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Re: He Listens
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 12:46:55 PM AEST
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| This is so lovely. a story of first love. Really enjoyed it. Sue x |
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Re: He Listens
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by candysears on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 04:47:42 PM AEST
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This was excellent...
Very good write..
God Bless! |
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Re: He Listens
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 10:57:43 PM AEST
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Sweet Shari~
A beautiful, inspiring and lovely write. Your writes always tell a story. I always look forward to ur next write my dear friend.
This one tells of what it's like when one falls in love. Absolutely beautiful.
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: He Listens
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by Mangos on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 04:14:43 PM AEST
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A happy ending…always nice to read one of those
Nice write
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