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YOUR SMILE
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emystar
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Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 12:44:51 AM in AEST
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My Love By Sea
SultryRose's Signatures
Jus wanted to whisper gently, Nite, nite.
Please make our dreams livable, alright?
As you slumber sending deep vibes.
Somday soon will be by your side.
1,000 miles, phycical out of sight.
On the phone to say goodnite.
But your smile can really hear
Beaming round from ear to ear.
Till we shall touch once again
My sweet, delicous, luvin friend.
MY heart beats sendin , my luv
With help from God above.
For you five thirty a.m. comes fast.
Remember our luv will eternally last.
Sleep well my handsome, only one.
When we touch will be more fun.
Jus a lullaby from me to you.
4eva luv,
emy
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emystar
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 01:25:03 AM AEST
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Sweet Emy~
A most precious and beautifully composed song you have here. Your longing for your loved one is so evident through ur write. May time be kind to u my sweet friend and may u be with ur beau real soon.
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 01:31:53 AM AEST
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| This is so sweet and romantic. I loved it. Sue xx |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 02:17:06 AM AEST
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| very sweet and cute ;) |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 04:01:46 AM AEST
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| Loved this beautifully written xxx |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by wrdz on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 06:24:25 AM AEST
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| Aren't feelings powerful? They bring out the very best in us. Excellent work here. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 11:21:20 AM AEST
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this is is so beautiful not 2 mention the creativity in your style. u still got it emy and always will have. *****
((((emystar))))
Ben |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 06:09:54 PM AEST
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Oh, emy, this was beautiful sweets. So soft
and gentle and full of LOVE. ♥
A gorgeous write and very endearing..
~Breezy |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 09:21:48 PM AEST
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you and this remind of a very good friend of mine at work.. that they too, send their love to someone special and far away each and every night..
you might even, be her - who knows!
As always-
Billy |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 04:56:34 PM AEST
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Very touching, and heartwrenching also. I pray you two can be together soon instead of later.
Warm love
momconsue |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by Lilly-Quill on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 01:07:53 AM AEST
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| Enchantingly, what a masterful way of ascribing such an eloquent muse ‘dear Emy.’ |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by Strawberry on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 09:30:43 AM AEST
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| very well written |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 05:35:30 PM AEST
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well writen poem.
it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!
luvs ya!
~Jess~ |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by PoeticHybrid on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 10:06:41 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem! You can see how much you love them in this. |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by RLWildPassions on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 10:30:22 PM AEST
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| beautiful, keep up that interest Emy, otherwise, a bond is not much worth. Lovely write.. |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by silent on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 10:23:45 AM AEST
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Your writing has almost always brought a smile to me so thank you for sharing, very subtle and sweet. Quote was a nice touch.
Silent |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 09:27:52 PM AEST
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aww its so pretty! it has a sad sweetness about it, very good write, makes me want to read more!
:-)
ashley |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by trueecho on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 05:06:59 PM AEST
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beautiful dedication..nicely done
trueecho |
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Re: YOUR SMILE
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by jackson21 on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 12:29:29 PM AEST
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| Oh emy, is beauty in all its splendor, can't seem to look away, yet your light seems to be blinding me you lover of shining stars! Magical, sensual and breath-taking is all i can put down in words! - Jack! |
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