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Untitled (call it what you want)
Contributed by
DiSTROYEDBYLOVE
on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 08:42:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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we had our up && downs
many mistakes
but we made it through
even though it was only a month
i really cought onto you
i cherise those days
we were together.
even the ones that werent soo good
im going to miss the feeling
the feeling i feel around you
that warm embrace of your arms,
the kiss of your lips.
is another thing i will miss
your touch your hugs,
everything will just be a memory
even though we are now just friends
im going to love you till my life ends
i miss you already.
even though it has only been a few hours
since you said it,
but it feels like more than a million years
you might not know how i feel.
but if you did. you would hate it
i thought you and i were meant together
but there are such things as mistakes
like the one you made that one day
the day on April 4, 2006
i will hold onto the memories for a long time
im going to wait for you
untill you think we can be together agian
but untill that day comes...
ima be wishing on stars for you to make up your mind
you changed my life once
but then again you changed it again.
you were the best of the best
but now your gone.
i will still do anything to keep you in my life
even if your just a friend,
as long as i know your okay
and i see your smile once a day
i will live.
im going to try to live life to the fullest
i wanted to thank you for changing my life
but when i was.
you changed it back how it used to be
making me feel useless..hopeless.
unwanted...ruined
but you had to do it
it was what you wanted
as long as i know your happy
even tough i will be miserable.
i can live with that for a while
you not the first to do this
sooo i know what to do
i love you forever && always
all i see is black and white
maybe when your back
i can see colors again
you bring color to my life
but since your gone
the color is fading away
i'll miss you untill you come back
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DiSTROYEDBYLOVE
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2006-07-09 20:42:01]
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Re: Untitled (call it what you want)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 10:27:59 PM AEST
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awesome poem.
unfourtunately, i know how you feel. heartbreak sux..and i know why they call it just that. it really does feel like your heart is broken. like something is missing...and it feels that way for awhile
but then it's amazing when you're over it...you feel sooooo much better.
great write, sorry about my ramblings. i really liked reading your poem, it was AMAZING!
- Bethani - |
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Re: Untitled (call it what you want)
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 04:19:36 AM AEST
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| Very good poem but just read the same poem, entitled No Clue.. By Happie. |
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