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Untitled
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 10:58:07 AM in AEST
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Sparkles like moonbeams
Show in her eyes
Smiling she sees
Right through his lies
Time is too short
To bask in sorrow
Today she will live
Who knows tomorrow
Singing a song
So gentle and sweet
She picks up
Her dancing feet
Leaving him behind
Moves to another shore
This she has done
Many times before
No time to play
Emotional games
No time for
Calling of names
She just moves on
Till she finds
A true heart
And peace of mind
Searching for love
Refusing to suffer
She will use joy
As her hearts buffer
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NoSaint
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2006-07-09 10:58:07]
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Re: Untitled
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 02:50:40 PM AEST
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What an awsome piece of writing
Leaving him behind
Moves to another shore
This she has done
Many times before
No time to play
Emotional games
No time for
Calling of names
I just love that.
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:13:54 PM AEST
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Oh Shari, this is postively replete with hope eternal!
I adore that last stanza. Talk about an optimistic take!
It's perfectly wonderful and wonderfully perfect!
awesome
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Re: Untitled
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 08:47:49 PM AEST
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The simplicity of words in this poem has given more meaning and depth to it and its flow has a melody; amazing work my friend, I read it more then a couple of times for the joy of it. WONDERFUL.
FRANCO
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Re: Untitled
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 10:53:54 PM AEST
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Shari~
I love your poetry sweet lady~ Always filled with hope& inspiration your poetry warms the readers heart. Your poetry does so much for me dearest Shari~ It lifts my spirits and always leaves me wearing a smile. Well done Shari~
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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