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Take Me Away
Contributed by
MountainDewFaerie
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Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 12:57:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Take me away to a place where the simplicity of life shall engulf my soul,
where my happiness shall stretch for eternity.
Take me away to show me the full moon,
basking in its ethereal light placed in the shade of night.
For that is how I want to live my life,
the contrasting beauty bringing unfathomable joy.
This dreamer's heart cannot be constrained,
the love it holds is ever burning.
The love I give shall not stop,
just as time shall never cease.
Take me away from the contraints of duty,
life in simplest form is a breath of fresh air.
True love is what my heart yearns for,
it must be hidden in a secret place.
So when you find the place where happiness and love reside,
take me away with you.
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MountainDewFaerie
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2006-07-09 00:57:24]
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Re: Take Me Away
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:53:13 PM AEST
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If only
lol yes i really enjoy reading this write
Take me away from the contraints of duty,
life in simplest form is a breath of fresh air.
I just love that
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Re: Take Me Away
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by midnight_writer on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 08:20:57 PM AEST
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i love it...
VERY well written
x-Midnight~Amaya-x |
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Re: Take Me Away
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by sohangme on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 05:17:53 PM AEST
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WOW! Wish i coudl go there too lol
Great poem! |
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