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Empty
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 03:57:46 PM in AEST
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Are these the only tears that fall?
Am I almost empty now?
All feeling's gone, I can't recall,
Why I lived, or even how.
It seems that there is little point,
In falling back in to my dreams,
Or close my eyes and find a place,
To hide inside my memories.
[There's nothing left,
I'm dead inside,
I have no hope
In which to hide.
And the darkness when,
I close my eyes,
Is more than I
Can now abide.]
And now I know the truth of this,
With every tear I fail to cry,
That while I somehow still exist,
I'm empty now, my heart has died.
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Re: Empty
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 05:48:41 PM AEST
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Beautifully presented low tide moment. Really good poets, as you are, can capture the emotion to relate such moments in a way that almost scares those who care about you. I had a time like this back in 2003 and I related it to an old timer cowboy poet and he simply said, "Stay in the saddle, pard." I pondered that advice in what I call meditation and the words to my "bring me up" poem came almost magically to me. I humbly ask ya to check out my poem, Stay In The Saddle 'cause it really worked to resuscitate my heart.
This one's a really good one, though; makes me want to go read my poem myself.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Empty
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by sandypoet on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 05:59:03 PM AEST
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| I loved the poem. you did a great job expressing your feelings. a masterpiece.. I am sorry your in this place of sorrow. Jesus loves you.. tell Him.. He will be there for you.. Me to if you ever want to talk. |
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Re: Empty
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by shelby on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 06:16:29 PM AEST
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Hun, this is so sad, you expressed your low points with such depth. I'm so sorry for your pain and hurt. Is there anything I can do to make you smile?? Pm me if you like sweety.
huge hugs and a tissue to wipe away the tears.
Michelle |
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Re: Empty
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 09:22:56 PM AEST
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This is special u know y and it touched me like no other poem u ever wrote, it's a caldrin
of beautiful thoughts and emotions, so revealing and like a little window in2 your soul. As beautiful as ever if not more upon this night.
((((Phill))))
Ben |
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Re: Empty
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 03:47:50 AM AEST
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| I really can relate. You've put words so brilliantly. |
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Re: Empty
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by dougnut on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 05:25:24 AM AEST
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I can empathise with your thoughts, been there a few times myself.
This is great that you can verbalise how you are feeling,
Its good to look back on when better days come around once again, I know they will for you too.
great write from the heart
awesome read.
thanks for sharing.
Hugs from Doug God Bless You |
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Re: Empty
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 02:59:15 PM AEST
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Awwww my philly girl
big hugs
Your write saids alot .
I am sorry that you have been feeling down.
If i could help some how let me know.
You know we all love you here.
hugs |
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Re: Empty
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 06:37:35 PM AEST
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Aw, Phyllis this is incredibly sad.
*huge like real Timbo hug*
I'm sorry to hear you have been feeling down. This however, obviously has generated a perfectly penned poem.
Please remember that you are a beautiful person and that we all love you here.
Sincerely,
Tim
*another huge hug just for the heck of it* :-)
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Re: Empty
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 02:18:10 PM AEST
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Beautifully sad and flowing.
A true echo of that emptiness that is inside all of us...if we could just reach out to fill ourselves.....sigh. |
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Re: Empty
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 10:41:45 PM AEST
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| My heart wept reading this. For it speaks of such dejection and loss. A sadness that pervades the confines of all existance. A coldness began to seep in my heart and a hollow formed for such a read as this does leave a mark most forlorn. But I guess it speaks well of your poetic wiles for it does speak to me. I do hope that you are not as down as this but perhaps just teasing the gist. Anyways a heartfelt write my friend and I hope your sojourn into the depths will end soon for then might you rise to shine with the sun and dance upon the skies. |
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Re: Empty
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 04:56:47 PM AEST
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Beautiful sadness..
my advice would be, to resuscitate that heart of yours.. life's too short as it is-
though as long as you keep writing - I'm sure that'll cure what ails you.. or at the very least, keep that heart beating.
Great work Phil..
Billy |
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Re: Empty
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 05:39:28 PM AEST
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Oh, phillygirl .. I can't tell you how sad this makes me feel ..
I want to 'mark' just where and when the pain gripped
me in this write, but the emotion that you've evoked is
stationed through it's entirety!
Incredible write hun. SOOOOOO bloody painful .. but
in a most exceptional and beautiful way ..
I have been here ..
I have felt this ..
*hugs you tons*
~Breezy |
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