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WINNING SMILE
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 01:09:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Weary, gloomy fretted faces
forgot to pass a humble smile; day or
night matter not the time, lay drowned
in material slime.
Happy for some, cheerless for many to live
in the global-hamlet, neighbored by snobby
bores and slogging workaholics, he lived to earn not
for him but to be even with his door next.
Quest to excel in the impious world he forgot to
smile as a human soul. A simple hearty smile
shower’s joy just not to the soul but to the
globe as whole - bring light into thy gloomy hole. (home.)
Smile can rule the godly globe – can
build a heavenly home, and win the thy longing lost love.
(FRNCO)
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2006-07-08 13:09:32]
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Re: WINNING SMILE
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 02:25:16 PM AEST
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A very beautifull, strong, true write.
Great work.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: WINNING SMILE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 04:18:56 PM AEST
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Wow Franco!!
What an excellent piece of work , I love it. I was just making a comment to someone close last weekend on this very subject! Thank you for sharing this and God bless you
Hugs ,
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Re: WINNING SMILE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 06:11:10 PM AEST
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I have this picture of you in my mind with an ear to ear smile. Makes me smile. Your words could inspire even the "snobby bores and slogging workaholics" to smile. I especially like "A simple hearty smile shower’s joy just not to the soul but to the globe as whole". Makes me think of the age old advice, "Smile even when you don't feel like it. Makes your friends wonder what you're up to and confounds your enemies." Excellent piece o' work, FRANCO.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: WINNING SMILE
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 07:35:48 AM AEST
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Much truth within these lines
the Magic of a smile
a beacon to the world
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