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Immortal
Contributed by
Surfpup
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Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 12:45:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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I willingly slit my throat,
I forcefully hang myself,
I go on a death trek,
The darkness must be dealt.
I lie, and I cheat,
I steal, and I take,
I master deceit,
The habit won't break.
I murder, and I kill,
I torture, and I rape,
I master all these skills,
The demons can't escape.
I hate, and I love,
I fear, and I cry,
I am finally human,
I can finally die.
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Re: Immortal
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 12:24:24 PM AEST
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Woah...
The ending packs more of a punch than I had anticipated! I enjoyed this---the wording was simple, but the message was NOT! Keep it up!!
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Re: Immortal
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:38:32 PM AEST
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I agree with scorpy there.
wow the ending does pack a stronge punch
I am impress
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