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The pause before parting
Contributed by
brainscol
on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 12:20:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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A movement
of his hand
..(a gesture)
Dating back to the
STARTING
.
.END
It all passes
before her
as she stands
.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
----------------------------------------------------------------------THERE
in the Middle
of the street..
Her feet naked;
stepping on glasses
He s-n-r-u-t
.his head
A glance
at the blood on the road
Black clouds
....The rain
washes it
.....
.away
Copyright Β©
brainscol
... [
2006-07-08 12:20:46]
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Re: The pause before parting
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 12:21:18 PM AEST
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This is kinda different, and I can see why it's under the 'Abstract' category...I like the style here though; I must admit, I find it somewhat intriguing. The only part I wasn't clear on was "Snrut"....? A typo I guess...but the rest was enjoyable.
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Re: The pause before parting
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by evolon on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 05:50:00 PM AEST
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imma have to agree i was caught with the style but it is indeed abstract and i to snrut... hes' in a rut?
ionno but i liked but im still trying to figure it ? if that makes sence?
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