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Smiling of the Moon
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 02:40:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A transforming melody
Played amid the silent skies
Dedicated to our both- loving souls
All tuned emotion it does comprise
Lost in mesmerisation
Upon this romantic eve- tis subtly true
Delicate aspirations for freedom
My faith is rekindled by you
-The moon smiles at us tonight-
Sharing in our pleasure
Of what is justly right
Laid hand upon hand
Becoming one
With thou twisted soul
One being of infirmity and flesh
A renewed person as we caress and loll
Encompassing darkness
Is it the night reflection or a hungry entity?
Rush to dismiss all beginning of thought
As embraced we are- consuming my identity
-The moon smiles at us tonight-
Approving of our youthful joining
Basking us in light
Now our love proving
Your lips unrestrained and precious
Yet poised and intimately powerful
Lamenting kiss- defining and truly luscious
Succulent smell of your skin
A ravishing- surrender to you passionately
My heart it would not suffice
To spend with you an infinite eternity
A healing is what you are
Shielding me from fright
Yes, we are meant to be
- For look! The moon smiles at us tonight-
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pUnKa_RaCh
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Re: Smiling of the Moon
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 05:12:21 AM AEST
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This is absolutly beautifull.
It reminds me os a special nite in 1985 with a full moon.
good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Smiling of the Moon
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by wizard on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 07:18:27 AM AEST
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awesome write punka rach!
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Re: Smiling of the Moon
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 07:43:22 AM AEST
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Rach~
Hey it's so good to see you posting again my friend. This is absolutely beautiful. The moon smiles at us tonight~ How breath taking . You have done a fine job with this write. Well done.
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Smiling of the Moon
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 08:31:49 AM AEST
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Wow poetry has a way of putting
things like the moon into words never thought possiable
and you did a wondeful job on this poem
very well written
Kepp on penning brother |
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Re: Smiling of the Moon
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 10:29:09 PM AEST
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yeah~ ..deliscous persuassion of though girl.. (I can hardly focus here.. lol)
I also, have an affinity for the moon-
love the 5th..
audacious as always luv..
As always..
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Re: Smiling of the Moon
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 12:04:05 PM AEST
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Wow Rach---good to rediscover your work!! I see you are just as wonderfully descriptive and visual as ever! The passion is somehow persuasive in this piece...I really like it!
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