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Forest Greetings
Contributed by
clarity_rising
on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 12:41:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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I saw you today
Behind
A mass of lilies
Floating like pastel ships
Lost at sea
Encompassed in
Water
Purer than diamonds.
Your smile
Radiant.
Your eyes
Glowing.
Your presence
Brief...
Come again
Fair woodland creature
Dance with me in the lofty breeze
Do not hide thy cherub face,
Embrace my friendship,
Cease to tease.
Copyright ©
clarity_rising
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2006-07-08 00:41:55]
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Re: Forest Greetings
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 05:31:24 PM AEST
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Excellent imagery and once again that old world feel to your writing. Truly very poetic.
Very well done
Larry
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Re: Forest Greetings
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 12:07:10 PM AEST
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a tapestry woven of natures best
Shari |
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Re: Forest Greetings
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 07:21:05 PM AEST
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a beautiful visualization and the perfect words to decorate - like those "floating lilies"
wonderful imagination.
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Re: Forest Greetings
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 02:42:41 AM AEST
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Beautiful, ah the imagery cast in my head is absolutely sensational. You weave magical mystical feelings into my heart my dear friend. I have missed you and your beautiful poetry. Where have you been hiding? I hope to see a new post by you real soon.
Mystical, enchanting and beautiful as always.
love n hugs,
sue m |
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