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Aching Revealed
Contributed by
flamingblade
on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 04:58:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Fire controls part of the soul,
The passion you feel, the love
you conceal
Ice is the other ruler
in your special place,
It is pain,
longing,
and grit
that make up this base.
Ice hides the ache,
and dulls the pain.
But fire melts it away,
and then slowly,
oh so slowly,
reveals what you feel
whether to your loss or gain.
'Tis so hard to tell.
Be careful who you greet,
you never know who'll you'll meet.
Copyright ©
flamingblade
... [
2006-07-07 16:58:28]
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Re: Aching Revealed
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by chaos78 on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 12:19:16 PM AEST
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| good write i truly like thanks for sharing |
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Re: Aching Revealed
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by Sasha on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 12:21:16 AM AEST
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| Beautifully told... A very interesting poem.. |
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