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That Night
Contributed by
BabiBoricua314
on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 01:26:59 PM in AEST
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That night, still haunts me.
Haunting me everytime i sleep.
Haunting me
as if itz a nightmare except itz real.
This nightmare of having an asthma attack after another,
i felt as if i was gonna die
and leave everyone
i love and care for.
My wheezing,
not able 2 breath.
My life flashing b4 my eyes.
My love being scared as he can be.
That night.
Haunting me as if it was meant to happen.
Copyright ©
BabiBoricua314
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2006-07-07 13:26:59]
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Re: That Night
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 11:54:42 PM AEST
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Yes i know how you feel on that one.
I watched my mother in laws face turning blue when she had a big asthma attack.
Lucky we got her to the hospital in time
anyway good write |
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Re: That Night
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by Muhammadshanazar on
Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 01:05:00 PM AEST
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The poetess though is alive yet experienced death from the very close distance; the shape and form of the death was so horrible that its nerve breaking influence hauted the poetess even when she normal, such experiences as the poetess went through bring a crucial change in thiking and behaviour; certainly the change might have occured in the poetss too. Good poem; take care of yourself.
muhammad shanazar |
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