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Watching from afar
Contributed by
-why_not_let_me_live-
on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 08:18:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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I watch you late at night, take photos when you sleep,
Follow you all day, down each and every street,
I know when your on holiday, I know when your at home,
But you dont know Im watching you, even when your alone,
My walls are plastered with your face, of pictures that Ive took,
And when Im not around you, I cant resist my temptation to look,
Im sure you've seen me in the distance, as just a face in the crowd,
But if you knew what I was really doing, Id have to silence the scream you'd sound,
I know where you work the names of your friends, and so much more,
I even have one of your braclets, from the man you most adore,
I've talked to your children, Ive been in your house,
And yes it was me who kidnapped you spouse,
The police think Im crazy, But all they do is lie,
I dont want to hurt you, it pains me when you cry
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Re: Watching from afar
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by blissful-ignorance on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 09:03:08 AM AEST
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| thats really good, you have great stalker insight... i like it, it flows well. it kind of has and sbrupt end, but overall its a great poem. |
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Re: Watching from afar
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by FatBoy3000 on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 03:42:54 PM AEST
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| I think it a bit dramatic and that your portrayal of a stalker is a bit steriotypical but all in all its quite good. |
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