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Learning
Contributed by
poet_in_waiting
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Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 07:00:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Learning
Sometime you stop
amidst a flurry of playing, dancing, singing …
something new or different
that you hadn’t noticed before
transfixes your senses
I ask you what you see,
but the world you’ve just entered
has soundproof walls
Finally you blink,
tilt you head, smile
and the flurry continues
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Re: Learning
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by Spike on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 07:44:14 AM AEST
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That's exactly what the munchkins do! My sons both did this pretty regularly. If you are lucky you get to have the same experiences as an adult - unfortunately others interpret it as a fugue state or episodic dementia. Their loss of the inner child.
Spike
p.s you know, it could be a cognitive reboot, much like when your pc has an overrun of activity and temporarily freezes.... but your version does read better. |
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Re: Learning
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by Winterland on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 12:41:07 PM AEST
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You did a wonderful job of capturing the moment. Bravo!
Jennifer |
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Re: Learning
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by judasman on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 06:11:35 PM AEST
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| the world as seen through the eyes of beautiful innocence. good write very powerful |
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