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Thoughts of why- fateful descovery
Contributed by
Caged Soul
on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 06:17:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I remember waking up one morning
to the sound of a sparrow on my cill.
This was going to be one of those lazy days-
all I was gonna do is chill.
After breakfast I heard someone knocking,
I opened the door and there he was standing.
From the look in his eyes there was no pretending-
this man knew what he was here for.
That morning, inhibition was a foreign concept.
In the aftermath of our carnal lustration
I got a strange feeling about this sinful situation>
You know the feeling of being watched
In the act of vicious violation.
I turned my head- there she was standing,
With tears in her eyes, she saw the whole thing unfolding.
I tried to talk to her, but she would not listen.
He told me to forget about her, as she is not worth it.
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Caged Soul
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2006-07-06 06:17:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Thoughts of why- fateful descovery
(User Rating: 1 ) by poet_in_waiting on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 09:06:18 AM AEST (User
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way to go ... this story has been surprising and entertaining, after the first one, i didn't the see the rest coming at all. harsh ending
great write thnx for not leaving me hanging
cheers
sean |
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