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Now I Know
Contributed by
Lonewolf07
on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 12:26:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I was sure
Sure that it would be perfect
Sure that we would always be together
Sure that it was meant to be
I loved you
And you felt the same
I was sure...
But I was mistaken
I was Certain
Certain that it wouldn't change
Certain that you would be there
Certain that I could find your heart
It was for me
And you would give it all you had
I was certain...
But I was wrong
Now I know
I know that it was all a joke
It was just one of your games
You were never really there
You never really cared
But its okay now
Because
Now I know
Copyright ©
Lonewolf07
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2006-07-06 00:26:31]
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Re: Now I Know
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by shelby on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 12:35:05 AM AEST
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Heart on a sleeve here, you did a wonderful job expression your emotions through poetic verse.
Truth is painful but its always better to know then healing can occur and we can move on to a happier better place.
Michelle |
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Re: Now I Know
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by bluestars on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 12:50:12 AM AEST
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Great poem
I can relate to it very well.
So now you know the truth, so the only
thing left to do is move on my friend, move on.
Best wishes,
~*Eve*~ |
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Re: Now I Know
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by ultimitloozer on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 02:25:16 AM AEST
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Normally, repetative words and/or phrases will ensure a quick jump to another entry, but it really works well here.
Well thought out. Well written. Clear language without any kind of obfuscation. And a theme that I am sure absolutely everyone can relate to.
Thank you.
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Re: Now I Know
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 02:31:23 AM AEST
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| I can also relate to your poem, brilliant poem.. I think its helped me so much on this site, made me realize im not alone in the feelings I have.. thank you x |
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Re: Now I Know
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by Tricia on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 12:51:44 PM AEST
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| So simple and so honest. Great Poem. |
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