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1,018,880 to ONE
Contributed by
Tricia
on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 12:18:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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1,018,880 Seconds to Nothing Definite.
At first it was just to waste time.
Another person to talk to while #2 got pushed aside.
But night after night, something changed.
Lonliness? Desire? Lust? Bordom?
I began this knowing exactly HOW and WHEN it would end.
Yet I had no idea what would happen before then.
Or Maybe I had a plan?
But now I have 16,980 Minutes to spend not calling you.
And I have 283 Hours to think about all of the stupid thoughts running through my head.
In 10 Days, I wonder, will my name touch your lips?
Or will this just turn into ONE big predictable mistake?
Copyright ©
Tricia
... [
2006-07-06 00:18:53]
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Re: 1,018,880 to ONE
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by shelby on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 12:37:11 AM AEST
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Unique in the way its presented, liked this!
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Re: 1,018,880 to ONE
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 02:33:21 AM AEST
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| It is different clever really liked it. x |
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Re: 1,018,880 to ONE
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by NDean on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 11:44:27 AM AEST
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SOOOO ace. and SOOOOO different. I love it. Its so unique. Very Good
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Re: 1,018,880 to ONE
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by Errious on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:26:40 AM AEST
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| Cool! very contraversial. I like the numerical aspect. good use of emotion. |
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