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A bitter promise
Contributed by
-I-am-
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Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 11:19:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I do as I'm told
I never talk back
I feel your hold
Your morbid attack
But tell me does it...
Make you feel strong
To make me submit
To string me along
One day I'll be gone
I promise you'll see
And you will know life
Without having me
Copyright ©
-I-am-
... [
2006-07-05 23:19:57]
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Re: A bitter promise
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by shelby on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 12:22:07 AM AEST
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Great expression in a small amount of verse, you did this nicely. Welcome to YPDC!
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Re: A bitter promise
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 02:35:39 AM AEST
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| Well think its very good hope you write lots more. x |
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Re: A bitter promise
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by Aeris030388 on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 06:29:11 AM AEST
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| I liked this one. It's a good length and gets directy to the point. Well done. - Roxanne |
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