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Fading in the realms......Of non-exsistance.....
Contributed by
brew
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Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 08:49:36 PM in AEST
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Darkness set in
For this is the time that all has not seen
Beauty torn from the eyes...But why?
Can we not see what is right there, Right in front..
No
Dreams are given, yet not followed..Ever
Seems people are
Blind
Not just by lights, yet by sight
Does this apply to one, even if they can not see?!
It is used to make the other feel...less.
It was given to the one who needed but gave up
Helpless
They can't turn back what was portrayed
No one has that much
Even if put right in front of the icy, tearing, eyes
Flowing
Stopping it will never......REPLACE
ALL
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Re: Fading in the realms......Of non-exsistance.....
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 09:04:12 PM AEST
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an enjoyable read brew...you brought 'depth' to a new level
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Re: Fading in the realms......Of non-exsistance.....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 12:00:44 AM AEST
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I gotta tell u dayna, u r one unique writter. what u do with the spoken word the way u do it and with so few lines and verses, yet tottaly dayna. solid and yet delicately pened. *****
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Re: Fading in the realms......Of non-exsistance.....
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by shelby on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 12:24:26 AM AEST
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Brilliance at its best my friend, Bravo!!
Take a bow please!
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Re: Fading in the realms......Of non-exsistance.....
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 01:16:27 AM AEST
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I've gained much from this.. Dayna~
people are cast out.. by stereotypes.. blind at times- live and learn..
Billy |
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Re: Fading in the realms......Of non-exsistance.....
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 02:15:06 AM AEST
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Dayna~
You rock my friend, I so much enjoy gracing ur pages. Time after time you can always deliver a write well worth the read. Much can be learnt from ur wonderful poetry dearest Dayna~ Thank you for posting this.
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Fading in the realms......Of non-exsistance.....
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 08:47:30 AM AEST
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I truly love your writing, and it's such a pleasure to visit your site.
Jeff |
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Re: Fading in the realms......Of non-exsistance.....
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by englishprincej on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 07:25:49 AM AEST
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What a sad write.
Someone gave you a dream which you had the opportunity to follow yet were too scared to do so, instead you prefer to be blind and live in the dark.
Sad, very sad. |
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Re: Fading in the realms......Of non-exsistance.....
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by RLWildPassions on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 10:33:42 PM AEST
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2 small heart attacks, might make it, one large one.. forget it... good thing though, a heart is not blind.. or is it.... a mind can take care of self, a heart takes care of others..... go often to the house of the sighted heart... where an understanding has pardon
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Re: Fading in the realms......Of non-exsistance.....
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 05:28:12 PM AEST
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this had a weird good feeling..
nice write
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Re: Fading in the realms......Of non-exsistance.....
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by Crow on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 03:08:37 PM AEST
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Brew" thought I would sneek over and read something. this takes me back to some paths long gone..excellent write and read. Crow
ps. what site? I want to visit... |
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