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B.l.a.c.k Silk A.g.o.n.y
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 08:30:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Black silk dreams
dying on the wings of an angel’s cadaver
Love and Hope are eternal,
Yet both lay b.r.o.k.e.n under the heel of Fate
S r g l n
t u g i g
to stand as wounds lament once-cherished memories
Phantoms of the past lapping at
The sweet pain that resides
And another line is written
On the flesh of the Forgotten
Becoming just another f a d i n g revelation
Taking one last breath on the {{trembling}} heart
Of
Wretched Affirmation…
. .
. . .
. .
. .
. . .
.
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
like stars laced with wishes unfulfilled
this liquid Death that hangs from the trees
of my eyelashes is more than I can
Endure
And I wanted to believe as I was c/r/a/s/h/i/n/g to my
knees
That there was a Forever with your name
~D a n c i n g~
in the winds
But there was only melodies of the Entombed…
There was only
S I L E N C E
.
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
... [
2006-07-05 20:30:24]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: B.l.a.c.k Silk A.g.o.n.y
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 08:32:08 PM AEST
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this was enjoyable...i like the abstract aspect of it..
wiz |
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Re: B.l.a.c.k Silk A.g.o.n.y
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by brew on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 08:53:02 PM AEST
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****** and plus.;;;;;;;;;Whata wonderful abstract for one whom has the heart, and not set......But, it brought out what was meant to be seen. Such beauty with a few words, given.
Brew~ |
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Re: B.l.a.c.k Silk A.g.o.n.y
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 10:33:44 PM AEST
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I'm so blessed to be able to read your delightful poetry Steph! Your style sets your writes off on their own, unique, I love it.
My little flower!
Michelle |
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Re: B.l.a.c.k Silk A.g.o.n.y
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 12:06:58 AM AEST
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Once again these pages are honored by your amazing genius of the pen. Poetry of nobility done in a most pleasing and insighful way. Treasures in which u make every one a part of. welcome back my friend.
((((Stephy))))
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Re: B.l.a.c.k Silk A.g.o.n.y
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by flamingblade on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 05:22:48 PM AEST
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very good job.
it made me think
touching ,really |
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Re: B.l.a.c.k Silk A.g.o.n.y
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 10:29:34 AM AEST
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Stephy~
To read this brought an agony I can't describe, (at least not with
as much talent as you have so captivatingly displayed).
Unbelievable pain in here, hun and so wonderfully conveyed, I can't
say enough how your talent and voice spark my inspiration. You, my dear,
are obscenely gifted!! Amazing.
A tortured piece that seared my very soul. I am struggling with the need
to quote lines .. but every single one touched me deeply. I could not place
any of them here in admiration, without quoting the whole damn thing.
Brillliance in the making!!
love and hugs,
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Re: B.l.a.c.k Silk A.g.o.n.y
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by Lee on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 06:29:34 AM AEST
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good dark write.
good stuff |
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