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Young Love, First Love
Contributed by
wrdz
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Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 07:46:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I know; it's repetitious in places, but does have a point (I think)
Unknown and unexplored
Is this
Young love, First love.
Like a soft-shelled egg, so unprotected
And vulnerable is this
Young love, First love.
So tender and sensitive
Is this
Young love, First love.
So intense and gripping
Is this
Young love, First love.
So impressionistic and powerful
Is this
Young love, First love.
Young love, First love,
Regardless,
It's all sent from above.
This
Young love,
First love.
Copyright ©
wrdz
... [
2006-07-05 19:46:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Young Love, First Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 08:11:19 PM AEST (User
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very nicely done!
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Re: Young Love, First Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 09:07:07 PM AEST (User
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oh the bittersweet rememberance of first love
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Re: Young Love, First Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 10:30:15 PM AEST (User
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A delightful piece. Yes the first love .
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Re: Young Love, First Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by lillyjane on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 02:51:03 AM AEST (User
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First love you never forget, but sometimes you see it through rose coloured glasses, I saw my first love a short while ago and realized what a lucky escape lol... Sorry dont want to ruin peoples memories just wish I still had mine. lovely poem xxx |
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