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~*A Last Good-bye*~
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 07:42:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Coldness crept in to blanket the sky
While the stars lit up the dark night
I sat down comfortably beside you
Watching the new moon come into sight
I happened to glance towards you
Noticing that tears filled your eyes
You grasped my hands so tightly
Whispering to me a soft good-bye
Gently placing my arms around you
I prayed to God to ease your pain
For the past few months I watched
Your efforts to get better go in vain
We huddled up on the porch swing
That’s how you had wanted it to be
The wind it blew a few gusty knots
I felt its iciness cut right through me
We feel asleep after talking for so long
I awoke to the shining suns warm light
Not knowing you took your last breath
And passed away quietly into the night…
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2006-07-05 19:42:29]
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Re: ~*A Last Good-bye*~
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 08:09:49 PM AEST
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awesome write sue...full of both beauty and sadness...i'm sorry for your loss.
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Re: ~*A Last Good-bye*~
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 08:37:53 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry I've made a spelling error. In the first line of the last stanza it should read Fell instead of Feel. My apologies.
sue m |
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Re: ~*A Last Good-bye*~
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 09:09:30 PM AEST
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so lovely a write...you expressed yourself beautifully...you have my deepest sympathy
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Re: ~*A Last Good-bye*~
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 10:02:32 PM AEST
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such sweet tender moments you shared with your friend. Oh I'm so sorry for your loss.
May your hurt be mened soon my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: ~*A Last Good-bye*~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 12:12:08 AM AEST
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Sue may your heart gently recover with time and only feel the softness of the beautiful memories that you've experienced. sorry 4 your pain my friend.
((((Sue))))
your friend Ben |
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Re: ~*A Last Good-bye*~
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by jerseysue on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 02:10:35 AM AEST
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No last goodbye,
You will never part,
For this man will remain,
Inside your heart.
Understand this fully, It is a beautiful poem, I know the sadness, I have lived it too. God bless. Sue x |
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Re: ~*A Last Good-bye*~
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 06:32:00 AM AEST
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Very sad and I'm sorry for the loss.
I lost a dear friend last Summer but he was in his seventies but none the less I know the deep feelings of loss even tho we know they are great and suffer no more.
A very sweet-n-dear tribute.
luv, huggs, prayers,
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Re: ~*A Last Good-bye*~
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 02:35:02 PM AEST
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painfully sad to read, the heartbreak is more than
words could ever describe i'm sure. As always before
your work is among the favourite of mine to read, with its weight and honesty i think your spirit will endure.
take care
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Re: ~*A Last Good-bye*~
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 10:45:04 PM AEST
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Dear Sue..
that I've only just now, come to this, is atrocious.. and I apologize luv - I only hope that time is kind to your heart my friend.. and to the hearts of all his other friends.. and family as well.
Take comfort in the fact, that they would be MOST proud of this~
Thoughts and prayers..
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Re: ~*A Last Good-bye*~
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 05:21:38 PM AEST
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My gosh Sue, this is a beautiful and loving tribute. You wrote this with such warmth and respect; he must've been a dear friend, as I'm sure you were to him too. Great job expressing yourself here; thanks for posting this.
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