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Tomorrow I shall see you
Contributed by
KarlaMarie
on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 08:28:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tomorrow I shall see you
I know this in my soul
But whatever shall I say to thee
It is that I do not know
For in the darkness
I am all alone
Fear enters unbidden
Threatening all I have known
The pain in waiting takes its toll
As much as I try and hide
My naïveté holds me back
From running to your side
But I never question my good fate
And the promise you have sworn
That soon we will be as one
Our love newly born
I cannot wait much longer
It tortures me sublime
My mind not knowing anything
Yet my heart still knows your mine
KarlaMarie
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KarlaMarie
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2006-07-05 08:28:58]
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Re: Tomorrow I shall see you
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 08:46:41 AM AEST
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lovely
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Re: Tomorrow I shall see you
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 10:51:02 AM AEST
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Very beautifull, hot write.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Tomorrow I shall see you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 11:55:38 PM AEST
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Kind of a bittersweet love poem you have here. The loneliness and fear. Then knowing what you know in your heart. I really like it. You have definitely expressed, very well, the waiting is the hardest part". A bit blue yet lovely, sweet, and beautiful.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim
:-)
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