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So I Have A Prob.

Contributed by SunRaise on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 10:27:30 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Day by day I ask myself why, why am I dying to live when im just living to die? Every day I act as if everythings dandy n sweet like candy, But its all lies, no one hears my ***** cries, at nite i lay toss n turn for my soul hurts like a 93 degree burn. Mind is weak Heart is broke,Love or Lust which is it that i seek? Life is Hell, by the tear stains on my pillows cant u tell, I think to myself should i jus give up n slit my wrist YES IM JUST THAT GOD DAM *****.Friends& Family will do just fine now that im gone,***** i Cant do ***** right anyway, And day by day I start to realize that, So when you find my body in the tub with red tinted water Make sure you tell my mother that she had one ***** up daugther




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Re: So I Have A Prob. (User Rating: 1 )
by wrdz on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 12:32:41 AM AEST
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As your name (SunRise) implies, the sun will always rise, and when it does, it will be the start of a new day. Each start to a new day is a new start to the rest of your life. Each day, each of us starts a new life. And so do you. God gives each of us a new start every time the sun rises. Never give up. For if you do, you will lose your start to a new life. And that would be a sad thing to have happen to you. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz


Re: So I Have A Prob. (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos78 on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 12:36:32 AM AEST
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i know that feeling all to good to give up on everything good write and thanks for sharing


Re: So I Have A Prob. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 03:25:18 AM AEST
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Very, very sad but well written.
Hang tuff and let the sun shine.
luv, huggs, prayers,
emy


Re: So I Have A Prob. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 03:25:42 AM AEST
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Very, very sad but well written.
Hang tuff and let the sun shine.
luv, huggs, prayers,
emy




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