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The Loss
Contributed by
THEL0STDREAMER
on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 10:24:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The shadows fell; the sun set over my head.
I stumbled through the darkness with my life unread.
The book of misconceptions is open and is covered with my name.
The road I travel is under a deep night sky filled with shame.
Not a star will shine upon me.
Not a dream has come to be.
Tears have stopped flowing for I fear I have none anymore.
In my heart the weakness that tells me I have nothing to live for.
The water flowed over my skin.
The blood was nothing but the pain from within.
There I stood, praying I wouldn't be broken.
The tears fell for each word I left unspoken.
The ground I fell upon for my knees went weak.
The strength I used to have has now gone meak.
So here I am just trying to face the life I made.
I made it this way, so difficult as it continues to fade.
The dreams I broke; the fires I refuse to put out.
Something happened and I lost all I knew life was about.
I can't stand here any longer; not with all this pain.
Now it's time I let go and be lost to the blood red rain.
Copyright ©
THEL0STDREAMER
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2006-07-04 22:24:51]
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Re: The Loss
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 10:37:17 PM AEST
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nice write...i really like it!!
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Re: The Loss
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 10:48:45 PM AEST
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Nicely written, but deeply sadden by the meaning. Take care.
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Re: The Loss
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by Sasha on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 01:00:19 AM AEST
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| Your pain is almost palpable, very well written indeed, hang in there, some of us have to go thru that extra bit of darkness and despair in life, life needs people like us though, to absorb imbalances... |
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Re: The Loss
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by chaos78 on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 01:06:43 AM AEST
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| good write, well written |
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Re: The Loss
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 01:18:08 AM AEST
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LostDreamer~
How sad ur words ring in my heart. Such pain, suffering and misery.
"What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared with what lies within us" Chin up and may u see brighter days ahead of u~ The best of wishes always
warm hugs,
sue m |
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