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Stargazer
Contributed by
wizard
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Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:37:20 PM in AEST
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Stargazer, where have all your stars gone?
Are there none out for gazing tonight?
Have the stars fallen from the sky,
like a million tiny tears, or were those from your eyes?
Like stardust upon the moon you stand; not a star within your gaze.
A queen upon a lunar throne, seeking your diamond studded skies.
Though in full search you stand, patiently surveying the sky for a
glimmer of hope, your eyes remain empty.
If a star you cannot find, or your sun has lost its glow…look within yourself,
for your glowing heart shall shame the sun, or the night with all its stars.
And when the moon has ceased to gleam, know that this night has died a gorgeous death.
And if you’re still in search of a star to gaze, you’ll know just where to look.
Thank you, stargazer, for gazing upon this night, for without your gaze,
the night is like a million days without a sun.
Never stop gazing, for these stars hold the love for which you’ve been searching.
Next time you're out...gaze a star for me.
Copyright ©
wizard
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Re: Stargazer
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 09:46:24 PM AEST
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Incredible write, it sings along, its pretty.
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Re: Stargazer
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by FreelanceDub on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 09:58:06 PM AEST
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| "know that this night has died a gorgeous death" That's beautiful wiz. Wicked slick hombre. Very excellent! |
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Re: Stargazer
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by Sagefairy on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 10:11:47 PM AEST
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So I've been told. I've had days like that.
I like this work - so hopegiving. Nice work!
J. |
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Re: Stargazer
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 11:02:38 PM AEST
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Wiz~
WoW, u never cease to amaze me Paul~
A most beautiful stellar write filled with so much hope.
Never stop gazing, stargazer, for these stars hold the love for which you’ve been searching.
So beautifully penned you reach deep into ur readers heart and touch it so gently~
Well done my dear friend and may there be a star that shines so brightly for you~
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m
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Re: Stargazer
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by wrdz on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 11:54:50 PM AEST
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| Hope is all some have left. You have shown thzdat no one should ever give up on that hope. Thank you for sharing this very nicely done write. wrdz |
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Re: Stargazer
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 12:08:07 AM AEST
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words and stars.. gazes..
..this work puts me right on your front porch bro-
can't help but think that LOVE itself, is the Stargazer~
(beauty beyond comprehension)
loving this it is not enough-
Yours in blood.. and forever~
Billy |
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Re: Stargazer
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by chaos78 on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 01:26:10 AM AEST
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| WOW truly beautiful |
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Re: Stargazer
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by godsangel2006 on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 02:16:12 AM AEST
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very nice
I love gazing at the stars. :) |
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Re: Stargazer
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by brew on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 07:30:57 AM AEST
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Seems the stars, are shining, but are they "bright" enough?! Such touching, and beautiful flowing words......could see the stargazer, sitting back, looking, up and in one single gasp.......sighing.! Always a pleasure to read what you pen, Paul. Your words, give the reader a vivid imagine of all.
Hugs
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Re: Stargazer
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by deadclown on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 08:49:05 AM AEST
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| Just read "TEN" so I thought I'd check out this one. You're ***** good. Sorry for the language moderator but he is good. The imagery I've got in my mind from this is fantastic. Nice one |
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Re: Stargazer
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 11:54:46 PM AEST
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Beautifully penned.
Heavenly beautifull.
huggs, star gazing,
emy |
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