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Death Rewinded
Contributed by
cribby
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Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 02:51:53 PM in AEST
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6 seconds you're about to die,
Your life's flashing before your eyes,
Your heart's frozen as the time stands still,
The pain lowers and your blood dries.
6 minutes just before you die,
The light vanishes in the void,
Love is fragile, it starts to break,
All your virtues have been destroyed.
6 hours, you still have life,
But it fades to black and white,
It's too late to change your mind,
A decision too far from right.
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cribby
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2006-07-04 14:51:53]
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Re: Death Rewinded
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 05:53:25 PM AEST
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I like the set up of how you done the poem. and I like the last line...suicide never the best decision...but i can see where people perform suicide tho.
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Re: Death Rewinded
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by vixdave on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:39:29 PM AEST
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| Really good....Suicide is a stupid idea but I am sure most people think about it once in their life...Really like the way it all fits into place....kudos to you! |
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